Thursday, November 26, 2015
Tuesday, November 10, 2015
Sea turtle writing
Miss McNae’s writing
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Cohort of dinosaurs
150 million years
Overcome the odds to survive Reptiles
10% survive to adults
1% survive with human intervention.
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Over 150 million years ago, along with the dinosaurs, lived a species of sea turtles. They have managed to survive longer than many other animals from that period. However, only 10% of sea turtles survive to breeding age. Now that humans have come along, only 1% of all sea turtles survive to breed the new generation of baby sea turtles.
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Over 150 million years ago, along with the dinosaurs, there lived a species of sea turtles. They have managed to survive longer than many other animals from the Jurassic period. However, only 10% of sea turtles live to breeding age. Now that humans have come along, only 1% of all sea turtles survive to breed the new generation of baby sea turtles.
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Our groups writing
Eggs
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Cohort of dinosaurs
150 million years
Overcome the odds to survive Reptiles
10% survive to adults
1% survive with human intervention.
• Cover the eggs and leave them
Eggs are white, leathery, size of a ping pong ball.
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Paragraph one
An adult sea turtle from the late jurassic period, which was 150 000 000 years ago, climbs up a beach to lay 50 to 200 ping pong sized eggs. First she digs a huge hole, so that she can lay the eggs. Sadly, in theory, 20% don’t hatch.
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An adult sea turtle from the late jurassic period climbs up a beach to lay 1000 ping pong sized eggs. First she digs a hole, so that she can lay the leathery eggs.
Sea turtles have lived longer than us. They even lived in the late jurassic. They usually live up to 50 years, or more. The sea turtle still existed
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Baby seaturtles
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Paragraph two
After 6 weeks, 800 leathery eggs hatch. The baby sea turtles are so small, they can fit in the palm of your hand. Then they start to crawl towards the water. Only 50% make it, because of the crabs and birds. Once they’re in the water, their next problem are big fish and whales.
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After 6 weeks, 800 leathery eggs hatch. The baby sea turtles are so small, they can fit in the palm of your hand. Then they start to crawl towards the water. Only 400 make it, because of the crabs and birds. Once they’re in the water, their next problem are big fish. 50% of the sea turtles that make it to the surf perish.
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Growing up
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As the sea turtles overcome the fish and whales etc, they have to huddle together because of unfortunate weather
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Paragraph Three
As the recently hatched sea turtles slide into the water, new animals are after them. This includes different types of fish, sharks, dolphins and also whales. They are extremely cautious as they swim up to the surface to take a breath of fresh air. After a few months of swimming in the ocean, the sea turtles group together under a slimy patch of seaweed for shelter from their hunters. After a passage of years, the survivors increase their size. Roughly 50% of the sea turtles that made it into the water would perish. After a long time, the sea turtles are old enough to come to the surface to breed. 20% make it to the breeding age without human interference, and only 2 survive to breeding age with human interference.
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As the recently hatched sea turtles slide into the water, new animals are after them. This includes different types of fish, sharks, dolphins and also whales. They are extremely cautious as they swim up to the surface to take a breath of fresh air. After a few months of swimming in the ocean, the sea turtles group together under a slimy patch of seaweed for shelter from their hunters. Roughly 50% of the sea turtles that made it into the water would perish. 20% make it to the breeding age without human interference, and only 2 survive to breeding age with human interference.
After a long time, the sea turtles are old enough to come to the surface to breed themselves.
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Conclusion
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They have been living for as long as 150 million years, since the late jurassic, which is amazing. It was thought to be a long shot, but it’s instead a miracle.
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Sunday, November 1, 2015
My spelling words of the week!!!
Monday 2nd November
November
fort night
Tuesday
writing
it's
its
"Victory out" XP
November
fort night
Tuesday
writing
it's
its
"Victory out" XP
Wednesday, September 9, 2015
BOXMEN
You have to use boxmen to get past some levels and this has maths in it because you need to think where you put the boxmen
Monday, August 24, 2015
Thursday, August 20, 2015
Tuesday 11th August
2014 Tuesday 9th August
There I was standing in the start line Beep! goes the horn then in my head I was saying just keep running but then poof!
One year later... and a few days later…
2015 Tuesday 11th August
There I was sitting on bench,sad saying in my head “what a Shame what a shame” but then again Poof! I was sprinting up a hill and Miss mcnae said you can do it people!” I think it was training? yes it wahahaha Poof! I was halfway to the finish line Poof! “Go Sammy Cha Cha Go Peachy! Go Hunta Da Monkee” that’s what I Said LOL >_< Poof! Poof! Poof! I was in the middle of a big big octopus attack!! ahahaha Poof! I was UM... In YouTube! in DanTDM’s Diamond dimensions ep:229 finding the murder Poof! In the garden wait their was two of we ahahahahaha that just scary man Poof! Their I was sitting writing this story about cross country.
Tuesday, August 11, 2015
Swimming
Wednesday 13 2015
Today we went to swimming and first we did free swim and then we go on the serious things like bake stork, sit in the bottom of the pool for two minuets,and other serious stuff then we (I) did the most stuff.
Monday, July 6, 2015
J letter by Victory
One jelly day a jellyfish called Jumping Jelly and one of his finest jumping friends named Johnny John John were having a Jumping Jellybean Champs practice.
“Jumping jellybeans! A jumpy bee is taking your spot for the best jumping camps! You have to see this now ” said Johnny John John “so where is this Jumping bee?” said Jumping jelly. “She is right there and she is on 100,000,000,000,000 jumps and yours was 100,000,000,00 so yeah” said Johnny John John “I will Jump to the jumpin jelly jumps jammy jam jam I want to challenge you to a Jumping competition!”Jammy Jam Jam “okay” said Jumping bee. “3 2 1 go” said the coach and Johnny John John and then.. 3 days later…”you guys it’s a tie you haven’t sleeped or eat you got to stop” said Johnny John Jhon “never ever’’ said Jammy Jam Jam and Jumping bee and then they never stop untill thay passed away.
Thursday, June 4, 2015
Victory's senses writing
Victory’s Sencers in school.
pronouns - replace the name of a person - eg I replaces Abby, we replaces Naomi and me, they replaces Blake, Georgia and Graeme.
verbs - action / doing words - ask yourself, ‘Can I do this?’ If you can, then it’s most likely a verb.
adverb - describes a verb, adjective or other adverb - eg-describes a verb, adjective or other adverb - eg softly, cheerfully,
noun - a person, place or thing - the name of something.
adjective - describe nouns
A simple sentence needs to have a verb, and a subject (who is there and what are they doing).
A compound sentence is two related simple sentences joined together with a FANBOYS word (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so).
Highlight your simple sentences in your writing.
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See
One cool, calm day the fast cars zoomed through the rocky roads.
I can see the poor trees growing moss.
I can see a barky playgournd.
i can see a big red,blue and yellow school.
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Hear
I can hear the hard rocky roads.
I can hear my cool friends talking like mad men.
I can hear the birds sing to their destination.
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Smell
I can smell the tough purfume.
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Touch
I can feel the rough w00d.
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Wednesday, June 3, 2015
pronouns - replace the name of a person - eg I replaces Abby, we replaces Naomi and me, they replaces Blake, Georgia and Graeme.
verbs - action / doing words - ask yourself, ‘Can I do this?’ If you can, then it’s most likely a verb.
adverb - describes a verb, adjective or other adverb - eg-describes a verb, adjective or other adverb - eg softly, cheerfully,
noun - a person, place or thing - the name of something.
adjective - describe nouns
A simple sentence needs to have a verb, and a subject (who is there and what are they doing).
A compound sentence is two related simple sentences joined together with a FANBOYS word (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so).
Highlight your simple sentences in your writing.
One smooth day the fast cars zoomed through the rocky roads.
I can see the poor trees growing moss.
I can see a barcky playgournd.
i can see a big red,blue and yellow school.
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Hear
I can haer the hard rocky roads.
I can hear my cool friends talking like mad men.
I can hear the birds sing to detination.
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Smell
I can smell the good perfom.
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Touch
I can fell the rough wood
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