Victory's senses writing

Victory’s Sencers in school.

pronouns - replace the name of a person - eg I replaces Abby, we replaces Naomi and me, they replaces Blake, Georgia and Graeme. verbs - action / doing words - ask yourself, ‘Can I do this?’  If you can, then it’s most likely a verb. adverb - describes a verb, adjective or other adverb - eg-describes a verb, adjective or other adverb - eg softly, cheerfully, noun - a person, place or thing - the name of something. adjective - describe nouns A simple sentence needs to have a verb, and a subject (who is there and what are they doing). A compound sentence is two related simple sentences joined together with a FANBOYS word (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so). Highlight your simple sentences in your writing.

See One cool,  calm  day the fast cars zoomed through the rocky roads. I can see the poor trees growing moss. I can see a barky playgournd. i can see a big red,blue and yellow school.

Hear I can hear the hard rocky roads. I can hear my cool friends talking like mad men. I can hear the birds sing to their destination.

Smell I can smell the tough purfume.

Touch I can feel the rough w00d.