Wednesday, May 20, 2015

My writing of a photo !

The bus…                                        On wednsday it was my frist day on school as a year 5 and I didn’t know anyone.it was time to say good bye to my family and my old school.  I was  going to pinehill school

I was nervous I had my backpack I huged my mum and dad when I was in the bus with other people I was independently seting on the bus looking out the window looking at my mum and crying but it was to late to leave the bus

5 comments:

  1. HI Victory,
    Watch your spelling 'setting'
    But over all i like your imagination.

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  2. i like it victory just watch out for your spelling

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  3. i like it victory just watch out for your spelling

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  4. I like your work victory but the word frist is spelled first.I like the word independently

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  5. victory just saying how do you know its wendsday? just sayin so yea

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